Do Admissions Counselors Really Read College Application Essays?

Wow Writing Workshop talked with college admissions officers about the college application process, including the role the essay plays. What they learned may surprise you.

Did you know every admissions counselor has a unique approach to reviewing college applications? Admissions counselors also read every word of your application – including the essays.

At the University of Michigan, Erica Sanders, director of recruitment and operations, reviews student academics before reading the essays. Ted Spencer, associate vice provost and executive director of the university’s undergraduate admissions, has a different application review style.

“I start with the academics first; then I read the essays to validate the application,” Sanders said. “Ted takes the opposite approach. He reads the essays first.”

Wow Writing Workshop spent four days last week in Denver, CO, talking to admissions experts, doing product demos for Wow Online – College Essay, meeting and getting to know high school and independent school counselors from the U.S., Canada and abroad, and chatting with educational consultants.

The Wow team interviewed representatives from many colleges, including the Big 10, the Ivy League, plus other private and public universities. We got a lesson in what goes on inside these colleges. Here are some general tips:

1) Don’t waste time trying to figure out the complex system of any university; do not listen to rumors. (Don’t apply; you won’t get in; a kid with a perfect ACT score and high GPA didn’t get into a particular school.)

2) Grades are the most important factor in admission, followed by rigor of coursework, test scores, degree of class difficulty and then the essays.

3) Essays – the first non-academic item on the list of importance for admission – are more  significant than you may think.

“We read each writing opportunity,”  U of M’s Sanders said during a panel discussion on the college essay. “We want to put it in context with what we see academically. We want it to be specific, different, something we can’t find elsewhere on your application.

“We don’t have the ability to interview students,”  Sanders added. “We want to hear their voice. As I am reading at 11, 12 or even 1 a.m., I want to read something that stands out, something that says, ‘Wow, this is a student I want to meet.’ ”

Jessie Hill, an admissions officer from Yale University, was also a panelist during the essay session. She said students need to write stories that show who they are without being over-edited.

“The danger in having too many red pens is that it is diluted and does not sound like a 17-year-old,” Hill said.

Kim Lifton is president of Wow Writing Workshop, which just launched Wow Online – College Essay, the first self-guided online tutorial for college application essay writing.

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Toby Proctor October 13, 2012 at 08:18 PM
Having two kids who had to write numerous essays, I can say that they were read. In one case what she wrote got her a full ride based on what she wrote, not her grades...
Thanks, Leslie. That is so sweet. We appreciate your support!
Thank you so much. What else would you like to know about the college essay? We write a blog each week, and we can tackle any subject you are interested in.
Toby, glad to hear your daughter got a full ride to college. That is the type of news we like to hear.
Hasta October 16, 2012 at 09:56 PM
My daughter wrote her "diversity" essay to U of M on how she would bring absolutely zero diversity to the campus, as a white, middle class kid from Macomb County. (It was the only way to answer the STUPID question...) She got in anyway. I don't think they read her essay.


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